some people think newspaper is the most effective way to obtain the latest information because it has more influence than other forms of media.
Newspaper, in comparing to other media forms, will render more impacts rather than other tools which will give fewer influences. This statement is believed by numerous people who thought that one of the effective ways to derive the newest information is by reading newspaper. In according to this issue, I am going to present my perspectives in the following paragraphs.
I do appreciate to the argument which believed that in order to obtain recent information, individuals are able to acquire it by reading newspaper. Nevertheless, I do believe that there are other media forms which are capable of doing the same things. First and foremost, another media form that is able to make people acquiring the latest information is by having gadget. Gadget, in this temporary era, is one of the primary necessities for people because it, moreover, has countless functions which are capable of helping people to finish their various activities such as assisting people to derive numerous new knowledges which they need and, additionally, aiding people connected to their relatives or other people.
Second but not less crucial media form is television. It, firstly, is capable of helping people to derive countless news, in particular, the people who like to watch television frequently. Secondly, all individuals, furthermore, were also able to receive various intelligences by watching news and films on television.
By way of conclusion, I believe that people, by having all of these media forms, are rapidly able to have the newest and recent fact about everything which happened in the world. Therefore, in order to make us being updated to all information, we will better have all of those useful tools.
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- Modern children are suffering from the disease that were once considered to be meant for adults only. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are its causes ad what solutions can be offered? 78
- Divorce rates in Finland and Sweden. 84
- Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.Discuss both these views a 61
- The line graph shows three different crimes in England and Wales in 1970-2005. 89
- Some of people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22909090909 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87024979476 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.6502306381 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.833333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232947804066 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826813229528 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646429800382 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12530126303 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06814170741 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.