Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn the news. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There has been considerable discussion concerning the most efficient way of learning news among the public in recent years. Some people argue that newspapers are, without a doubt, the best source to attain information, while I believe that there are other media that can even perform better than newspapers in this aspect.
On the one hand, I understand why some people are of the fervent conviction that newspapers have such an important role in providing news. In fact, many generations have considered that only newspapers can bring about up-to-date news since the articles are thoroughly written by reliable journalists. To demonstrate, people have been reading newspapers due to the fact that they include a spectrum of the most significant events happened not only around the world but also in the country. All the sources are properly investigated before being published, so many choose to acknowledge news only through newspapers. Moreover, they are an affordable method for catching up with the fast-paced world right now, as they are sold almost everywhere.
On the other hand, I believe that other social media platforms have the capability to provide news than other conventional sources. As a matter of fact, webs and social media can keep us informed with actual events within a small period, and they are even equipped with search engines so that people can comprehend a particular event. Take the Black Lives Matter movement as a prime example, it has been a worldwide issue that everyone must take into consideration. With the help of a wide range of educational information from many sources, we can have a more profound understanding of racism, thus take part in enforcing equality.
In conclusion, certain people consider traditional newspapers are the principal source of learning news, but I believe that there are cutting-edge media that can even help us more in getting us informed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, while, in conclusion, in fact, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28013029316 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91354194596 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57328990228 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.289839952 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.1 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342227153318 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124059118968 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718829933476 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217899494682 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780309415823 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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