Some people think that not all criminals should be kept in prison. Some criminals should do unpaid work to help other people in the community. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Basically, criminals are people who have done something bad or even something fatal that made them got into prison. There are many ways that bring to prison, from the very little actions into a very huge actions. Just by stealing things, we can get into prison if we get caught. That's the most simple example. Another example is if we get caught using drugs, that's dangerous and of course the police will bring us to prison. Last but not least is ending someone else's life. That;s a heavy case and a huge case, and of course we will got into prison. No excuses for someone who has killed another human being's life.
As a gentle human being, we have to face our consequences of our actions. Them who get caught and get into prison, shouldn't be mad, instead they should realise what they have done. They must have a courage to face their consequences.
I'm kind of disagree with statement above. In my opinion, they have to get into prison. They have done something bad. Prison is their consequences. Not all prison are scary though, if we are a good person, i believe there will always be a way for us no matter what. No matter if we are in prison.
Welll, if we don't bring them to prison, I'm kind of afraid they will repeat the same mistakes, or even the worse mistakes. They have to face prison so they will think twice if they want to do another bad or criminal actions, or if they still do that and moreover get caught again. They will get back into prison or worse.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'action'?
Suggestion: action
...he very little actions into a very huge actions. Just by stealing things, we can get in...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...e can get into prison if we get caught. Thats the most simple example. Another exampl...
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Line 1, column 360, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...xample is if we get caught using drugs, thats dangerous and of course the police will...
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Line 1, column 534, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'get'
Suggestion: get
... and a huge case, and of course we will got into prison. No excuses for someone who...
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Line 1, column 603, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
...or someone who has killed another human beings life. As a gentle human being, we h...
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Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: SENT_START_THEM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Then'?
Suggestion: Then
...o face our consequences of our actions. Them who get caught and get into prison, sho...
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Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...hem who get caught and get into prison, shouldnt be mad, instead they should realise wha...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...courage to face their consequences. Im kind of disagree with statement above. ...
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Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... scary though, if we are a good person, i believe there will always be a way for ...
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Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...r if we are in prison. Welll, if we dont bring them to prison, Im kind of afraid...
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Line 7, column 41, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...Welll, if we dont bring them to prison, Im kind of afraid they will repeat the sam...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, still, well, even so, kind of, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42124542125 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16163153993 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505494505495 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4754586363 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.35 106.682146367 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.65 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.9879759519 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126839970619 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409135024681 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400602188562 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832540825987 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231255432209 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 13.0946893788 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 12.4159519038 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.13 8.58950901804 71% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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