Some people think that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children’s development than playing computer games. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today world, parents usually find playing console games as negative habit, whereas they love their children attending to outdoor activities because they are more useful. In my opnion, I partially agree with the above statement and we should consider the advantage of both these activities independently.
To begin with, involving in outdoor activities is definitely what the children needs in order to improve both mental and physical health. First of all, by learning sports and eventually playing them, every youngsters will increase their strength. For example, football requires a certain level of stamina due to the need of running all the field. If the children can play it weekly, they can be stronger. Moreover, communicating with other players also makes them become active people. Hence, they can talk and give opinions easily. Meanwhile, they may face difficulty when start to play. However, it is one of the best way for them to demonstrate the independent skills which is vital for the life later.
Although, it seems like outdoor activities would bring all the positive things that the children can get, games is still beneficial particularly in terms of reasoning logical. When the child plays games, their brain will have to work in order to think the most efficient way to win. Therefore, the children will certainly be better at solving problems.
In conclusion, during the grow of the children, they need to absorb and be able to increase their abilities both mentally and physically. That is the reason why adult should let them to play both of these.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 23, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ving problems. In conclusion, during the grow of the children, they need to absorb an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11583011583 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60882748168 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637065637066 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0136643327 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212147997599 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634471722177 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449325423691 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125427436335 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466768565489 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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