some people think that schools should involve students in school management. Do you agree or disagree with this idea? Give reasons for your answer.
Considering the pace of alterations in the tertiary education system, the role students can take up has become more and more indispensable, so much so that it is thought involving these learners in decision making should be taken into account. I agree wholeheartedly with this point of view that students should be entitled, respected, and above all listened to.
It is widely perceived there should be a learner-centered approach in schools based on which the performance of students and teachers can improve hand in hand. By doing so, students can inform the principle of the school as well as teachers about not only the educational issues they face regularly but also the personal concerns they possess. Consequently, teachers can mend the way they teach and provide such education seekers with workable solutions deeming their problems, playing a part in putting these educational staff members and students ahead of the game. Thus, allowing students to participate in what should be done while in school can be the linchpin of any progress.
The help of students occupies center stage in delivering a multitude of benefits for themselves, as the main beneficiaries. In effect, by taking part in situations in which game plans of the school are drawn up, students can achieve practical skills such as critical thinking, helping them encounter the real world properly and fit in the labor market. In doing so, self-confidence shaping these learners’ personality will be fueled, not undermined. Contributions made by students towards taking some decisions, notably some of which are of the highest importance, therefore, can be regarded as the bedrock of any success they will gain.
In conclusion, the more decision-makers students become, the more confidence they gain. Indeed, the truth is that under no circumstances can we turn a blind eye to the fact that their roles are capable of affecting the education system through which learners are taught. What is wished is that all those who are the principles of the schools would seize the opportunity to make use of the potential pupils enjoy.
- Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid? 89
- It is expected in the near future that there will be a higher proportion of old people compared to younger population in some countries. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your opinion and examples. 73
- Some people believe that managers are responsible for the organization’s success, while others think various features of the organization play a vital role in it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 67
- It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. What are advantages and disadvantages of this development? 89
- These days it is very common to have people from two different generations mix in the same workplace. Are there more advantages or disadvantages to this situation? Give your own opinion and include relevant examples. 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20527859238 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98520472832 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.3330667939 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.538461538 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2307692308 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182157166541 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690344467582 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402542719393 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109617677284 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370810994852 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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