Some people think that some types of criminals should not go to prison. Instead they should do unpaid work in the community. To what extent do you agree?
Nowadays, many people have argued about judging criminals. Although, there are conflicts about sending offenders to jail or owing work in society. Personally speaking, I would agree on the latter but to certain extend.
On one hand, not all the crimes have stood for similar statements. Moreover, younger generation may indulge in offence either for parental needs or out of over population .For instance, illegal crimes of teenager, is antisocial action that is distributed out of poverty, sake of money and also over population that has been reduced of needy resources .Not only, drug addicted is considered delinquency but also a breach the law. As a result, drug addiction could be dominated by the government and law by adopting the teenager to owe community service in order to add them value.
On the other hand, certain crimes should be punished by higher authorities as the rate of offences are dramatically increasing .In addition , the negative issues in the community is expanding .As an example, some countries following stricted rules and regulation for robbery crimes which declined the percentages of crimes. Furthermore, acting in violence way is threating the safety of the surrounding .As, it was said that the higher authority is given to keep society safe by removing criminal from outside world that leads to security and peaceful life.
To sum up, owing and voluntary community service has great value and influence for uncritical crimes. In my perception, some criminals had to be merged with unpaid society work unless it is mingled with violence and breaking the law as a result to unsafely and unsecure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19245283019 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76399404258 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656603773585 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.116089054 49.4020404114 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 137.6 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109448598579 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387210177435 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351073375808 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0658555131432 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369999784457 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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