Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence,while others think intelligence can be measured in other ways.
What’s your opinion
Thesedays, some people believe that the only way to know that you are a smart kid is to be a successive person, on the other hand, another people says that the intelligence can be measured in other ways. This essays stands with the second people due to its realistic in the actual world. The essay will first look at the reasons of choosing that side followed by what can measure your intelligence.
First of all, to be a smart person its not only by reaching success you have to make more than one step and its not measured by only reaching success. The success you can reach maybe you have reached success because of any person’s help or any outer help from any thing that made you reach success not only by your skills and your level of intelligence. Moreover, there are different types of success, you can be a successive person but in a stupid thing and you will think that you are a successive person no your not you did not do anything that will benefit any person. For example, can you compare the scientist with the actress where both of them are known and famous and maybe the actress are more rich than the scientists , absolutely no, because the scientists did a really important thing and did a useful thing for the humanity. On the other hand, the actress did not do any thing useful, but only made the people happy and laugh, which is not useful to the humanity.
Second of all, if you think that you have a high level of intelligence, so try to solve a hard equation or a hard question in any thing not only school subjects or in your college. If you did it and answered it correctly s you are smart in this field and maybe you have a high level of intelligence but it is not the only way that you can measure you intelligence with too. For example, maybe you can solve any complicated equation or question but in the real world you can’t communicate with strange people in the street.
To sum up, intelligence can’t be measured by only reaching success it’s one of the things that tells you that you are smart in this field. In my point of view, you do your job and be a hard worker and do all what you can to be a successive person at the end and donotsayamIasmartkidornot,nodoallwhatyoucan.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...at the end and donotsayamIasmartkidornot,nodoallwhatyoucan.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, moreover, really, second, so, for example, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43276283619 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07333042558 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.383863080685 0.561755894193 68% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.3590310869 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.461538462 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4615384615 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264614581677 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122258296541 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908369469382 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213648099813 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0934268168648 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.01 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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