Some people think that teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think adult life brings ,more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
We spend our whole childhood wanting to grow up and then spend some moments of our adult times wanting to go back to being a kid again. Deciding about which years are the best years of our lives is surely a topic of conflict.
Our teenage years, like most would agree are carefree, fun and always revolving upon us. Where there is no responsibility to worry about, a age where we are just old enough to be independent and yet young to be dependent on our parents, friends, relatives for many reasons such as monetary, emotional support, for mentoring and guidance. As teens, we were bold enough to take risks, try new endeavors if one failed and carefree to experiment and explore. Most of our cherished memories are also made in these years. Memories with friends, family, with the travel to a new destinations even if it meant a trek to a nearby mountain or a grand foreign trip along with family. This is a life we live with great vitality.
“Adulthood is not an age, but a stage of knowledge of self”, John Fowles.
And yes I completely agree with this famous novelist who very simply gave clarity and meaning to the word adulthood. This stage of life gives us freedom in numerous ways. We are our own master. We have chosen a profession which helps us aspire to work towards a better life. We cherish the moments of buying our own home and of creating a new family. Even though we have the responsibilities of taking care of a family and balancing work along with it, we have a sense of fulfillment. We have left our carefree attitude behind and have transformed into more mature individuals and focus on the long term commitments. We are secure emotionally and all our experiences have made us more established and calm.
Both these phases of life gives us perks in ways which are special.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s a life we live with great vitality. “Adulthood is not an age, but a stage of...
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...ave made us more established and calm. Both these phases of life gives us perks...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60990712074 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62021951874 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594427244582 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.9580379474 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7222222222 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9444444444 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.77777777778 7.06120827912 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103516692632 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399575349827 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346642912634 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659898380821 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429654168426 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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