In most countries disabled people are not catered for adequately, e.g. buildings are often inappropriately designed. Governments rely too heavily on charities and voluntary organizations to provide assistance and funding. What further measures could be taken to assist disabled people?
Even with the help of many charitable organizations funding and raising awareness for the betterment of the disabled, the governments of all the countries individually should take it up to make the society a better and comfortable place for people with special needs.
The environment we live in is not designed for those who struggle with certain disabilities.
While many countries lately are catering to the needs of the disabled, there are yet certain countries who yet have to familiarize with making or understanding that the world also consists of people requiring an extra facility for making their life more comfortable.
The very basic facility should be the infrastructure of buildings by having ramps instead of stairs or elevators, allotted parking, public and easy to use toilets.
Also to mention, making public transport more disability friendly by keeping ramps, rails and certain seats reserved for the disabled.
For example, In the UK there are pavements for the disabled which also are slightly raised to indicate the end of the pavements.
The above mentioned deals with people who have physical disabilities.. We should also keep in mind people with various other disabilities, for example the ones who are deaf and or visually impaired and many more. For example in the UK the traffic signals have both light and sound signals.
Also encouraging disabled people to be hired in a company if they have the qualification should be encouraged as this could be profitable for the company in many ways, one being that the disabled will not only get confidence and acceptability which will ultimately lead to the person being more productive as well as the others. Also studies have shown that people with disabilities take fewer days off, are reliable and also stay in jobs longer than other workers.
While certain countries do have benefits for the disabled, one such benefit that should be maintained worldwide is for the disabled to be given riddance of his or her taxes. There are yet certain people who still, due to their disability, face problems to earn their daily bread and butter.
Forgiving their taxes can make their already difficult life a bit less difficult.
Still there’s a long way to go if we were to build a safe environment to accommodate the disabled members of our society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, well, while, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09635416667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78244819501 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533854166667 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.0724570194 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.466666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.38176352705 251% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188254127034 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644641728889 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400007242852 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748393164455 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383224227074 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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