Some people think that there are things individuals can do to help prevent global climate change. Others believe that action by individuals is useless and irrelevant and that it is only governments and large businesses which can make a difference.
For ages, global climate change, a popular topic, has been discussed not only by governments but their people as well. Thanks to the media, people today have deeper understanding and better evaluation of this issue. While many regard the problem as the governments and large businesses' responsibility only, others believe that to help prevent global climate change, individuals' role should be counted.
Firstly, global climate change is believed to be the result of greenhouse effect, which mainly relates to human activities destructing environment such as polluting the air, cutting down trees and so on. It is undoubted that governments and large organizations play an important role in the fight against the change. There have been a lot of international forums and seminars organized among nations or organizations to search for the possible solutions to the change. This is important because they can make the agreement among those nations as well as provide supports to the countries in need. Secondly, many countries are on their way to complete or revise their law to minimize bad effects on environment from industrialization and modernization. Domestic and overseas corporations,therefore, must pay attention to their businesses in order not to violate the law.
On the other hand, those, who have been suffering the consequences of the climate change, are doing their utmost to minimize the loss and improve the situation. For instance, acknowledging and experiencing extreme weather patterns affecting farmers’ crop, farmers turn to develop organic farming. This will help reduce air and soil pollution level. Furthermore, many environmentalists, scientists and volunteer groups have proved their vital role in protecting and improving environment to the world. Not only can they make an impact on policies on the issue but they can also join in activities to relieve the situation. Bit by bit, individuals are contributing to reducing pollution, which partly slow down the climate change and gradually reverse it.
In conclusion, while governments and large businesses play a major part in dealing with the global climate change, individuals’ role is undeniable. As for me, governments should raise public awareness of the issue and promote individuals’ ability so that people will be able to contribute more in this fight.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun regard seems to be countable; consider using: 'many regards'.
Suggestion: many regards
... better evaluation of this issue. While many regard the problem as the governments and larg...
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Line 1, column 276, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'businesses'' or 'business's'?
Suggestion: businesses'; business's
...he problem as the governments and large businesses responsibility only, others believe tha...
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Line 2, column 787, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , therefore
...tion. Domestic and overseas corporations,therefore, must pay attention to their businesses...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1995.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4958677686 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27377987173 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559228650138 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1062861409 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.352941176 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3529411765 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.47058823529 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306361944887 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889307932188 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841584524315 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199066693507 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733310355211 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.