Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Submitted by Sue Ng. on Mon, 09/04/2017 - 15:44

It is argued that essential solutions should be applied to control noises, while others believe that they have the rights to make as much as noises they want. However, in my perspective, reducing noises is better.
On the one hand, there a variety of reasons why residents prefer to making noises. Firstly, a lot of individuals feel more comfortable and freedom when working or entertaining with loud noises. For instance, loud sound of radio or music may be the best way to reduce stress and relax after a backbreaking day without worrying about their next - door neighbors. Secondly, more and more people think that noises are a part of industrialization and modernization process, thus this is unavoidable. Traffic noises or engine sounds are increasingly familiar to citizens in urban areas. As a result, there are no particular reasons to put the noises under control.
On the other hand, I believe that it is lots of benefits if we have strict rules to control noises. The first reason is noises can cause some harmful effect such as unhealthy lifestyle, ear diseases, and so on. For example, insomnia is becoming popular with urban residents because of discomfort noises from near industrial parks. If this situation lasts for a long time, both mental and physical system can be damage and cause many diseases. Moreover, the productivity of workers could be decreased, many blue-collar workers talk that they can not focus on working due to surrounding noises from heavy vehicles on the street every day.
To sum up, it seems to me that to have a better life, noises ought to be restricted, though noises are caused by some people who just care about themselves and do not consideration for others.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 69, Rule ID: PREFER_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'make'?
Suggestion: make
...iety of reasons why residents prefer to making noises. Firstly, a lot of individuals f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9512195122 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76814083536 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630662020906 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2598163954 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280764305757 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792700094343 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746293684598 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172196907749 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643138196297 0.056905535591 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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