Some people think that when a person travels into a different culture they should adapt to the local practices and customs.
A few people reckon that if someone visits a new culture he or she need to stay according to that particular culture. In my view, I do agree with the above notion. The essay will elaborate the reasons for that reason.
Currently, with the decent infrastructure people tend to travel all over the world. Due to that they will experience new cultures and meet new people. It is vital for everyone to adapt for the new culture and local practices such as rules and regulations in order to have a blissful journey. It is apparent that people cannot live the way that they actually want in another place. For instance, tourists who are visiting Saudi Arabia they need to wear proper clothes instead of wearing numerous clothes and moreover, people cannot use alcohol in there. Furthermore, people who are going to the temple of the tooth in Sri Lanka, there are certain ethics that people need to focus on in order to protect and keep the value of the particular place. Owing to the above reasons, we can comprehend that it is crucial for people to adapt for the culture and the practices.
In addition, people can have a plethora of benefits due to this. Specially, they can enjoy their time freely and have a happy moment, they won't face certain troubles if they love according to the particular culture. For instance, in Beijing the Chinese people love their visitors if the visitors behave accurately and Chinese will give them free meals and transports as well.
To sum up, in order to experience and enjoyable moment it is wise decision for the travelers to adjust their way of living in numerous cultures and customs.
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- Pie chart IELTS Academic Task 1 Sample Essay 3 2014 Age Distribution in Asia
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in addition, such as, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73591549296 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45978113044 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521126760563 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3276375396 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0714285714 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194443373444 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670142125249 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380607884827 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102608795318 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603776755731 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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