Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
In the present time, the animals are on the edge of extinction and be became the target for hunting purpose. To preserve and protect them from that issue, people have constructed many zoos around the world. However, there are some people have an opposite point of views. They belive that zoos are cruel and should not be opened. In this essay, I will give some comments to both perspectives.
First, people think that zoos catch and lock the animals in the cages and do not look after them carefully. Moreover, in the world, there are the many group of circus abuse the animals to work for them. They torture and make the animals obey them. For example, the elephants and the monkeys have been torture for many years and they too fear to fight back when the tamer hit or threat them.
On the other hand, there are still positive aspects such as conserve and protect them from the extinction and hunters. Furthermore, zoos gives the animals a shelter to keep them safe from hunting. In addition, the zoos prevent them from the extinction because they will set the couple of species into one cage and they can sleep together to create an offspring.
There always have both advantages and disadvantage in every issues also the zoos. As mention above the zoos may be the reason cause harm to animals otherwise it also bring them a home or a shelter to protect them from any threat. To decide whether zoos good or bad, it depends on the way people treat the animal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, look, may, moreover, so, still, for example, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6106870229 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18809839934 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541984732824 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9302552631 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5333333333 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192861644558 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758354431454 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620469254761 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131964294113 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767985450605 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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