The marketing is raptly changed over a decade. Today primary concern for shopkeepers or businessman is to sell their products with the fast speed. So, they let their shops run for longer time than in the past. However, there is a loop in this change whist I emphasize that it had overall positive development for sellers, consumers as well as manufacturers.
First and foremost, inflation is accelerating with passage and to beat it every single person is going for overtime work in their particular professions. Same phenomenon is followed by shopkeepers. Not only to sellers it also provides job opportunities to individuals as tutees who are in urge for part- time job can go with this in the evening after their study duration's. Moreover in this busy scheduled, most of the consumers were not able to go for shopping whilst in the evening they can go to market and purchase needy things and feel refresh. Moreover, long runs of medical shops make easy purchase of medicine in the emergency situations.
The solely con for this is an insufficient time for peers and leads to the rivalry tensions in the family whilst this can be easily overcome by spending time with the family at weekends. Nevertheless, pros for this overcome this cons. In terms of benefit the long open of shop accelerate the monthly sale of products which directly surged the profit of manufacturer and which will result in the increment in its staff and workers’ salaries and this will incline the economy of nation.
To recapitulate, It is reiterated that the shop opening at long hours will result in the positive development for seller, buyer and manufacturers and will also add charm in the company prestige and sales.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 212, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...s run for longer time than in the past. However there is a loop in this change whist I ...
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Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
...hopkeepers. Not only to sellers it also provide job opportunities to individuals as stu...
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Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...viduals as students who are in urge for part time job can go with this in the evening aft...
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Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...he evening after their study durations. Moreover in this busy scheduled, most of the co...
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Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r study durations. Moreover in this busy scheduled, most of the consumers were no...
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Line 3, column 550, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d purchase needy things and feel refresh . Moreover, long runs of medical shops ma...
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Line 3, column 553, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...urchase needy things and feel refresh . Moreover, long runs of medical shops make easy p...
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Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ds to the rivalry tensions in the family whilst this can be easily overcome by sp...
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Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...nding time with the family at weekends. Nevertheless pros for this overcome this cons. In te...
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Line 5, column 408, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd which will result in the increment in its staff and workers' salaries ...
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Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ich will result in the increment in its staff and workers' salaries and th...
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Line 5, column 425, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ult in the increment in its staff and workers' salaries and this will inc...
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Line 7, column 24, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'reiterated'.
Suggestion: reiterated
...my of nation. To recapitulate, It is reiterate that the shop opening at long hours wil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95486111111 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80108454708 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579861111111 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0263570872 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.769230769 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151420706545 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525728513466 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429249874488 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100924597307 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284660352441 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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