Some young people believe it’s best to move out of their hometowns when they become adults, while others wish to live in their hometowns their whole lives.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In current times, there has been a disparate amongst the young populace about living in their hometowns. Many of them have a strong opinion about moving out of their hometowns when they reach their adulthood, while others like to lead the rest of their life in the same town.
Most of the young people have varying degree of ambitious dreams they want to fulfill in their life. In order to strive for them, they have to find out relevant opportunities which would lead them towards that goal. And they would argue that it would be highly unlikey to find those opportunities in their hometown. Some of them move out of their hometown just for a change of perscpective. Having spent their adolescence in only one town, they are likely to experience a fatigue from the same lifestyle they have experienced these entire years. In order to bring about a change from their bland lifestyle, leaving their hometown seems the most apt thing to do to them.
While there are many of them who would like to leave, there are some who are likely to stay in their hometown. They are most likely to stay because of sentimental reasons. As they have grown and nurtured in this town, they would likely have a ton of memories associated with various parts of their hometown. Not only that, they would have also developed certain relationships in the form of friends and colleagues in this town. This emotional attachment is sometimes too hard to break. Also, many of them do not leave as they have likely found a sense of self-satisfaction in this town. They would argue that they are in a really happy place in life and would not like to have a change in their lives.
While both sides have valid opinions, most of the young people are very ambitious and would like to make strides to make their lives better than it was. While the prospect of a stable life sounds very pleasing, it is not always possible to lead it in someone's hometown. People have to find opportunities in their life, and in very few cases, it is the other way around. So, I am likely to fall in the campaign that it's best for young people to move out of their hometown.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56657963446 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39302410436 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.443864229765 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4703276551 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.0526315789 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1578947368 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.42105263158 7.06120827912 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368486833137 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139892158714 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963565821422 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285417997469 0.151304729494 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945011835043 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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