In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?
Despite the fact that a lot of innovations are made in the field of farming, plenty of individuals around the globe yet sleep with empty stomach. The reason behind this problem is the massive increase in population. Let us discuss the causes and solutions of this in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, there are multifarious factor of this phenomenon. First and foremost is the overpopulation which effect the food supply of the country. To explain, owing to the rapid rise in population in last few decades, the demand of food has also augmented termendisouly. Nevertheless, the resources and supply of feed are limited which lead to scarcity of food stuff in the nation. Furthermore, wastage of food is another reason of this issue. To clarify, In many restaurants, marriage place and public gathering events there is huge wastage of food. As a result many people sleep without a bread butter. To illustrate, a survey conducted by UNICEF in 2012 in Pakistan revealed that 10% out of the total food supply goes into waste.
However, there are numerous solutions are available to tackle with this issue. Primarily, governments should control the population. To elaborate, authorities ought to make strict laws which ensure that there is limited growth of populace. Consequently, there is decrease in the consumption of food and less folks will deprived from food. For example, China had implemented the one child policy in order to control the birth rate.
Moreover, burecafts should control the price of goods. In other words, they should monitor that the items are to be sold on MRP of below it which resulted in more people will be able to buy the food.
To encapsulate, although there are many reasons that people struggle with hunger such as inflation, by following appropriate steps it can be solved
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, for example, such as, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06953642384 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77701671762 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576158940397 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3260929534 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5789473684 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8947368421 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.89473684211 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149698778612 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446473911309 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468159317693 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865285177482 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411943158012 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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