Sports help to a greater extent to build peace in world. Do you agree or disagree? Give some examples and include relevant experiences in your response.
Sports are one way for people to momentarily remove their daily problems and tensions. In my opinion, I partly agree with this point of view. Similarly, international sports events bring human life's physical and spiritual advantages. On the other hand, I believe that sports events lead to an increase in criminals.
First of all, sport helps considerably with societal harmony in a variety of ways. People in a country that organizes sporting events, in particular, will strive to forget about life's pressures and sorrows in order to enjoy sporting activities with pleasure and enthusiasm. As a consequence, their lives will be filled with happiness and peace in a short time as they become more friendly and sociable. For example, in 2011, the global cricket tournament was held in Bangladesh. It brought considerable excitement to the people, despite the numerous issues around them and their country. Above all, sporting activities create international togetherness, thus enhancing global peace and cooperation. Furthermore, it reduces the degree of political tension between countries.
On the other hand, one of the negative consequences of sport is an increase in the number of crimes. When a particular sports event takes place in the world, some people will take advantage of it in order to earn more money unlawfully. For example, when sports events such as the Euro, World Cup, Olympics, and so on occur, some people will create many sports betting games online and offline, and the losers have a negative proclivity to become criminals in order to have money to continue participating or repaying debts. As a result, the number of offenses in society will rise.
In conclusion, sports bring enjoyment to everyone, but they also create opportunities for bad people to profiteer. Countries should support the development of community-building sporting events and establish strict crime-prevention policies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42142857143 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06470193643 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610714285714 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.823069319 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.875 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131767088751 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404668312553 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285951679246 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077371495901 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117933113961 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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