Children should always follow their parent's advice
Some people say children should follow their parents' advice, others claim this is not always right. I believe that children should follow their parent's advice when they are young, but they should become more independent when they are older.
Young children do not distinguish between wrong and right. Parents are the best persons to teach them about differences. For example, Young child does not know that it is wrong to take things that do not belong to them. So, parents can teach their children about danger, both in the home and outside.
However, when children grow up and older, they should pay less attention to their parents. Parents can give advice about their children's occupations that help children chosen easier, but this is should be the children's decision. Parents can tell the child how to live, but when they are grown up. They can decide for themselves. If a child does not make own decision, he or she might grow up to be less independent and strong.
In conclusion, Parents need to give advice to their young children on morals and safety. But not on how to live when they are older.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: IS_SHOULD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 192.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77083333333 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25113300948 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515625 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 258.3 506.74238477 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1155510122 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4615384615 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7692307692 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39823606101 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14733948769 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14210469782 0.0667982634062 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258913327146 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125977174627 0.056905535591 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 50.2224549098 165% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 11.3001002004 46% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.39 8.58950901804 74% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 78.4519038076 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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