Students today can easily access information online, so libraries are no longer necessary. Do you agree or disagree?
Students today can easily access information online, so libraries are no longer necessary. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, because of rapid Internet development, students can easier to connect information online without going to the libraries. The advantage of the online source is not negative, but I do not agree that libraries are no longer necessary.
On the other hand, libraries provide advantages that online sources do not have. Firstly, because libraries were often located in quiet places, students can focus on learning. As a result, their study quantities might be improved. If students learn from online resources, they might face many ensnare from games online, which negatively affects their learning. Secondly, since everyone can east publish information on the Internet, these online sources are not reliable. But, as all information provided by libraries is reliable and official, students can get respectable knowledge.
However, there are some advantages of online resources. Firstly, since online sources provide more information than libraries, students can research and study many majors without changing the location. Secondly, many libraries’ infrastructure is not good enough for students to search for information. For example, the library in my university was opened 50 years olds, most of the Information Technology books are old and not enough up to date. As a result, I have to search for this information from an online source.
In conclusion, there are many advantages of online sources, but in my opinion, libraries are still essential.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...students can get respectable knowledge. However, there are some advantages of on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61570247934 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93485317491 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566115702479 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5479814082 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9375 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.125 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407958982777 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151760728412 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.189908410466 0.0667982634062 284% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.327181818919 0.151304729494 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.34621679947 0.056905535591 608% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.72 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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