It is true that nowadays, sport players are getting huge amount of money as their incentives, whereas highly qualified professionals are receiving merely less amount. However, some people advocate that it is fair due to some reasons, While others feel that it is not necessary.
On the one hand, talented sports players do not have any other source of income other than from sport authority or sometimes from the government. In fact, these people truly sacrifice their entire life for the country so they deserve to get a handsome salaries for a fruitful life. In addition to this, they may have family, it is responsible that look after them such as their parents,wife and kids in a proper way. As a result, such players can certainty play well and entertain people as well as can take care their own family, if they get better income .Thus, this is clear that sport professionals should get more salaries than other professionals.
On the other hand, some people claim that saving people from fatal situations and natural calamities are the basic factors in this society. This could be possible only skiled professionals like doctors, nurses, engineers and scientists and therefore they need to get a high wages from the institution. This is due to the fact protecting a life is a vital part than entertain the public. To cite an example, today, these employees working hard to save people in many ways especially doctors and nurses who spend almost half day and sometimes whole day in the operation theatre without having even food in order to save life. Hence, these people are only eligible to have a good amount of money owing to their dedication and spirit.
In conclusion, although the sport member work hard for the country, I believe that professionals like medical practioner and other workers are only eligible to get a massive salary because they are inevitable part in this society than sports men.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94444444444 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5798555436 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558641975309 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.702877096 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.5 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272756945525 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105640950733 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710404046137 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172589248071 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252174346183 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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