Talk about a situtatiin when you cheated by someone
Telling lie a very bad habit but not in all situation because sometime speak half trust important for other person because of the Welfare of them. Here I would like to talk about a situation when I cheated by someone. I remember that it was happening with me last year, it was my 18th birthday. I got up very early in the morning and I was very happy ar that day. But anyone did not wish me and they were behave very strange with me. I was felt sad then I started to do all thing which I do my routine. I went to school my friends also did the same thing with me because they were all planed a birthday party for me. They did not told me anything about it. When I reached at home then I was very surprised because they decorated all my house with the Balloons and flowers. My all relatives and friends came there and all started to wishing me. Then I cut cake I was very happy at that time and it was the first time when someone gave me party so this is the time when someone speak like to me
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 406, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'behaved'.
Suggestion: behaved
...ut anyone did not wish me and they were behave very strange with me. I was felt sad th...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 631, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'tell'
Suggestion: tell
...d a birthday party for me. They did not told me anything about it. When I reached at...
^^^^
Line 1, column 706, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eached at home then I was very surprised because they decorated all my house wit...
^^
Line 1, column 730, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s very surprised because they decorated all my house with the Balloons and flowe...
^^
Line 1, column 945, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he first time when someone gave me party so this is the time when someone speak l...
^^
Line 1, column 980, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'speaks'.
Suggestion: speaks
...party so this is the time when someone speak like to me
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 1615.20841683 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.98994974874 5.12529762239 78% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05206098078 2.80592935109 73% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517587939698 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 258.3 506.74238477 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.216858249 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.1818181818 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115068331573 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553644789298 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100414474845 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115068331573 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 13.0946893788 49% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 50.2224549098 156% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.57 12.4159519038 45% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.88 8.58950901804 68% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 78.4519038076 22% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.