Task 2: Some say that news has no connection with most people’s life and it is waste of time for most of us to read newspapers and watch television news programs. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that it is useless to read newspapers and watch television news programs to know some news because these news is not close to people’life. This can be a sound argument but to me personally, I disagree with this opinion when news is crucial these day..
The first reason is that some unfortunate people can be assisted. Because there are a greal deal of programs which usually report a lot of poor, disabled people who really need not only money but aslo care. For instance, on VTV chanel, a program called ‘Cap La Yeu Thuong’ films life and difficulty of poor, homeless people or orphans everday, and people are moving and pathetic when watching. Since filming them on the television, philanthropists can know and assist them with money and love. As a result, unlucky people will have a better life than before.
The second reason is that we can update official statuses around us. These day, there a great amount of fake news and rumors is spreaded in the Internet which makes all people feel confused and nervous. For example, when Viet Nam, my country, had the sixteenth case infection of Covid-19, a lot of people rumor and say that Viet Nam had the 50th caase infection. This made individuals around me feel scared and afraid. However, this will never happen when reading official newspapers and watching national chanels because all of news reported is confirmed. Due to checking, news is always true and credible.
In conclusion, I completely disagree that updating news on newspapers and television is meaningless and waste of time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 120, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
...news programs to know some news because these news is not close to people’life. This can b...
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Line 2, column 261, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
... with this opinion when news is crucial these day.. The first reason is that some unfort...
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Line 2, column 270, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...s opinion when news is crucial these day.. The first reason is that some unfortun...
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Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'deals'?
Suggestion: deals
... be assisted. Because there are a greal deal of programs which usually report a lot ...
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Line 4, column 69, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'These days'?
Suggestion: This day; These days
...can update official statuses around us. These day, there a great amount of fake news and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, second, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93962264151 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6014865537 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588679245283 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2359449853 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324347078156 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104396686799 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102766835362 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222407842299 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887085277018 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.