There are an increasing number of people who do not know their neighbours. What causes this situation? How to solve it?
Everyone nowadays is concerned with their work and objectives. Therefore, they do not have enough time to properly learn about the people around them, as more and more people lead a self-centered lifestyle. I will talk through some of the causes and solutions.
To begin with, everyone is extremely busy, and they also want to work in their leisure time for a better future, whether it is having the best position in their office or workplace. Most employees work late and occasionally neglect their families and other relationships for a specific reason. Another reason is the advancement of technology for people of all ages. Nowadays, practically everyone owns a cell phone and utilizes it for a variety of functions, including connecting with loved ones, because people do not have enough time to get to know their neighbors.
As a result, this problem is more complex than others. This is a problem that the majority of teenagers face on a regular basis. Therefore, the head of society should provide a small park and organize different kinds of activities to make sure that it is easy for all people to meet their neighbors and that they will get to know them properly. Furthermore, instead of spending their days hooked into electronic gadgets, all parents should encourage their children to play outdoor games of multiple styles to develop their awareness of individuals and the world around them.
In conclusion, everyone forgets the importance of community and everyone is busy with other activities. Therefore, individuals should meet with their new neighbors and help with various types of work that will make it easy for everyone to learn about their neighbors.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-09-07 | Luisjackiet | 84 | view |
| 2022-09-07 | tung0303 | view | |
| 2022-09-07 | tung0303 | 56 | view |
| 2022-09-04 | Luisjackiet | 67 | view |
| 2022-09-04 | Luisjackiet | 78 | view |
- As people live longer and longer the idea of cloning human beings in order to provide spare parts is becoming a reality The idea horrifies most people yet it is no longer mere science fiction To what extent do you agree with such a procedure Give reasons 78
- Behaviour in schools is getting worse Explain the causes and effects of this problem and suggest some possible solutions 84
- Nowadays most people are moving and living in big cities Why is this happening Is this trend good or bad 89
- Many people say the gap between rich and poor people is wider as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer What problems could this situation cause and what measures can be done to address those problems 78
- Some countries are struggling with an increase in crime rates Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crime To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 73
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...ave enough time to properly learn about the people around them, as more and more people lead a self-ce...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...centered lifestyle. I will talk through some of the causes and solutions. To begin with, e...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08695652174 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73137464977 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0180351703 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159900859871 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595739752816 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268191824185 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101252130226 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355850408786 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...ave enough time to properly learn about the people around them, as more and more people lead a self-ce...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...centered lifestyle. I will talk through some of the causes and solutions. To begin with, e...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08695652174 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73137464977 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0180351703 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159900859871 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595739752816 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268191824185 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101252130226 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355850408786 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.