Despite the presence of various kinds of music, ranging from traditional or folk melodies to the modern or international compositions, many still question its utility as well as selection of a particular variety based on its origin from within or across the borders.
Music is becoming an essential part of our lives due to many factors. Firstly, people listen to the sweet melodies as a hobby in their pastime. While listening their favorite notes and rhythms, they tend to forget their anxieties. Secondly, music is being considered as an integral part of therapy, especially in the rehabilitation and palliative care of terminally ill patients. For instance, studies on infants has shown some promising results in the healing from surgical wounds when they were hearing the lullabies sung by their mothers. Finally, music is an indispensable element for different events in our daily lives, ranging from marriage celebration to funeral services.
Now coming to the selection of music, it depends completely on the personal preferences. Obviously, nations should take care of their culture and folks, investing in preservation and spread of their traditional music to masses. In this way people will feel proud of the work carried out by their ancestral musicians and will be able to inculcate the patriotism in their coming generations by supporting and safeguarding their traditional songs.
On the other hand, many argue that music has got no boundaries. Actually, musicians and artists are not considered to be restricted to any particular area or country. For example, inclination of younger generations towards listening to songs sung in the foreign languages is in vogue. In my opinion, countries may be benefitted in many ways by sending their vocalists across the world, like spreading the messages of peace and love as well as making the others familiar with their culture.
In conclusion, the vocalists are in reality are ambassadors when they perform out of their country. Such exchange of arts and culture internationally help not only to preserve the traditional music but also provides an international language suggesting the need of peace and prosperity worldwide.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35260115607 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97714797592 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578034682081 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9703588052 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.75 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4375 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211885896154 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734976358739 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059306507901 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120164214761 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149746007178 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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