There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Survey depicts that nowadays there are number of music exists around the globe. While some people prefer to listen traditional music and other prefer international which is being listened everywhere. I, however, believe that traditions are more essential to keep the country long live and famous.
This paragraph will discuss about the requirement of music that actually plays most significant role for every country in several events to demonstrate the country's traditions along with enjoyment and relaxation. Firstly, some people believes that music is the best way to get relaxation while doing some hectic work for instance, work hard in office, continues reading for examination and many others. Moreover, many intellectual people are concerned that number of functions is being held in the country wherein people prefer their national songs owing to mother tongue as well as motivation such as Independence Day.
On the flip side, traditional music is more important instead of international, to live long life and show the unity of the nation. In addition, it has seen that plenty of countries are earning money through their music concerts namely; United States of America, United Kingdom and Thailand that eventually is far beneficial for their economy as well.
All in all, tradition expresses national identity in front of the world. Whereas, in order to outweigh the country's name it is the responsibility of every one to support and promote their culture that eventually will be noteworthy for the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35269709544 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72842953898 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605809128631 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1507932853 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279782681194 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110521425049 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592103441049 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165057612847 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723653221934 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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