There are several factors that motivate people to stay in the workforce, and money is the most important factor. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are numerous factors that make employees remain in their jobs. While it is incontrovertible that salary is one of the most significant factors, I firmly believe that other people still remain in the workforce due to other reasons.
On the other hand, there are many reasons why money is one of the motivations for people to remain in the workforce. Firstly, money is of paramount importance for people to achieve an acceptable standard of living. Without well-paid jobs, it will be difficult for employees, especially urban dwellers or breadwinners of extended families, to shoulder an ever-growing financial burden from accommodation and food. Secondly, some ambitious people simply want to move up to a career ladder, and a high salary is also one of the fundamental aspects that indicate the prosperity of individuals. As a result, money has been widely regarded as a main target of life for both modest people as well as high-flyers.
On the other hand, for several employees, there are other factors that can motivate them to stay at work. Particularly, many people regard job satisfaction as an indispensable requirement when compared to their salary. For example, if a person prefers working in the outdoor environment, it is impossible to dictate to them to pursue a career full of sedentary tasks. Additionally, contribution to the communities is also another reason for maintaining the jobs. For instance, although zookeepers or environmentalists may be quite low-paid in some developing countries, several people are still pursuing these types of jobs, which is simply because they possess a sense of responsibility toward protecting endangered species or preventing ecological degradation.
In conclusion, although money is a vital factor for employees to stay in their current job, I would argue that this is by no means the key reason for most people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 683, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...n target of life for both modest people as well as high-flyers. On the other hand, for se...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25666666667 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15865477696 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7543256404 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.307692308 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4615384615 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190899342949 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710821388365 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574622203659 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122809840792 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156119763687 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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