There is more and more outrage and anger common in society today. Why is this? Is this a positive or a negative development?
At the present time, a plenty of modern people are becoming bad-tempered easily. There are several causes for this phenomenon, however, I believe this would bring more disadvantages which will be elaborated more below.
To begin with, more and more people become outrage and anger because of hectic schedules that require excellent performance exerting them on pressure. In order to release stress, family as the closest ones may deal with the irascible individual. For instance, young couple can create marital conflict ranging from verbal to physical abuses. Furthermore, lack of mental awareness which would result in damaging effects seems to be compelling reason. In the long-term, this inflicts bad psychological changes in ones' life; soft and interpersonal skills. Should they effectively improve their self-regulation, they will consciously control inappropriate behaviour.
Regarding negative development of this, in my viewpoint, showing uncontrolled aggression may bring people about encountering quick decision. Regarding bitter disappointment, they probably destroy expected plan to reach their goals, hence, this behaviour appears to create negative psychological changes; imprudence and spineless. In addition, the outrageous and incensed personalities could seemingly harm people surrounding. As opposed to wise response, the intense frustrated individual will arouse burning hatred among social groups. For example, the furious employers in the workplace would probably ruin the lucrative business between the company and cooperate party.
In conclusion, the main factors of this issue are increasing level of job demand and lack of mental awareness. Thus, I would believe the demerits of this to a person appear to be justifying irrational decision and damaging social relationship.
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furthermore, hence, however, if, may, regarding, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.93846153846 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06100691172 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684615384615 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1942804444 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.933333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.86666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23849192862 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643355012799 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797149768888 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141179080614 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417679904821 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.88 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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