These days, a lot of people have their own computer and telephone, it has become quite easy do job from home. Do you think it has more advantages or more disadvantages.
Technology made life easier and smoother. Especially, working life has become more comfortable and efficient as everyone having own gadgets such as smartphones, computers.in my perspective I believe both have their own merits and demerits; however, advantages more outweigh than disadvantages.
Discussing the positive influences, the biggest advantages is that, with the advent of the machine age technology, now, it is possible to do the job at any corner of the world without physical interaction. Secondly, thanks to telecommunication, there are myriad resources available for the communication for a job -fax machine, email, and others. Apart from this, it is also possible to small business flourish at a large scale, in fact, compete with the multinational companies. since due to the technology medium, which is possible to meet with the customers.
Furthermore, there is no requirement for workspace as servant choose to do the job at home also the individual can get advantages of the comfort zone.in addition to this, not only get advantages of the working space but also spending quality time with their kith and kin. Moreover, working in a traditional way it is a strike to balance between work and entertainment. In order to, do work at their comfortable place the individual can pursue their hobbies, recreational activities, the physical activities are possible.
On the downside, despite certain advantages, we cannot overlook the disadvantages of working online. Firstly, if work at home, they will be insecure as there is no face to face communication, so there are many possibilities of cyber fraud or looting on cyber sites.
To summarise the above discussion, we may assert that, although there are few disadvantages, we cannot overlook the positive sides.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 481, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...mpete with the multinational companies. since due to the technology medium, which is ...
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Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a traditional way" with adverb for "traditional"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...h their kith and kin. Moreover, working in a traditional way it is a strike to balance between work ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, apart from, in addition, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40357142857 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23307011166 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610714285714 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0595347013 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.083333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4166666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193796012801 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541807836179 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704196077448 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912768927948 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745090035114 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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