The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap
and clean energy.
The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The development of nuclear technology in the military and as an energy source is a controversial issue. While some people think that nuclear technology helps to maintain world peace as well as providing an alternative energy source, I believe that the advantages it brings to us cannot outweigh the disastrous effects it brings to the human race and our nature.
Nuclear weapons, as massive destructive weapons, is are not an effective tools to maintain world peace. In contrast, they threaten human survival once it is they are used. A The nuclear bomb detonated in Hiroshima, Japan, during World War II is a good demonstration on how destructive this weapon is. When a nuclear bomb is was detonated in Hiroshima, it immediately killed tens of thousands of people and more than ten thousands of people were that suffered from horrific injuries and later died from radiation exposure. So, it is clear that nuclear bombs are is catastrophic and cause unspeakable suffering to mankind.
Although nuclear energy provides a clean and cheap energy source, the harmful effects it generates outweigh its advantages. These dreadful effects have been illustrated by the destruction of a nuclear power plant in Fukushima, Japan, during the tsunami in 2011. Radioactive waste was leaked out from the power plant during the tsunami, causing massive contamination to the Pacific Ocean. The radioactive levels of fishes as far away as California is have been reported to have a high level that can lead to cancer. From this incident, it shows that there is no way to control how far radioactive fallout will spread. Thus, it is not worth developing nuclear power due to its disastrous nature and, in fact, other sustainable energy sources, like solar energy, are available To sum up, the advantages of nuclear technology do not outweigh the drawbacks because the impact of nuclear technology is cataclysmic to both the environment and human beings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'tool'?
Suggestion: tool
...uctive weapons, is are not an effective tools to maintain world peace. In contrast, t...
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Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'A' or 'The' is left.
Suggestion: A; The
...uman survival once it is they are used. A The nuclear bomb detonated in Hiroshima, Ja...
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Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: VBZ_VBD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
...ve this weapon is. When a nuclear bomb is was detonated in Hiroshima, it immediat...
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Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...this weapon is. When a nuclear bomb is was detonated in Hiroshima, it immediately ...
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Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: 'ten thousand'.
Suggestion: ten thousand
...ns of thousands of people and more than ten thousands of people were that suffered from horrific...
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Line 4, column 452, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
... of fishes as far away as California is have been reported to have a high level that...
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Line 4, column 775, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ources, like solar energy, are available To sum up, the advantages of nuclear tec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, well, while, in contrast, in fact, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14240506329 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85330572304 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541139240506 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.951349401 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306175023922 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102651679649 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726064112877 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199020985588 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288163887655 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.