Today, the majority of children are raised by their grandparents due to the fact that their parents are busy working. To what extent do you think it affects the whole family?
it is an indisputable fact that modern life has forced employees to spend much of their time at work. As a result, most youngsters today are nurtured by their grandparents, and this may lead to considerable impacts on the entire family.
One of the clearest effects of this is that the relationship between children and their grandparents is much closer than it was before. In the past, nuclear families with a pair of adults and their children were more than the norm, but now youngsters spend more time with their grandparents, leading to the fact that they give more affection to each other. While children may perceive their grandparents' great care for them, the elders can also feel less lonely and be happier. Many senior citizens reluctantly spend their 60s in nursing homes, so staying with and nurturing their grandchildren can make their aging time more meaningful.
Equally importantly, though, parents may have time to focus on developing their careers, but they have to exchange such professional success for a shortage of time staying beside their sons or daughters. Consequently, they cannot enjoy complete happiness, which involves work-life balance. Furthermore, although grandparents can teach the children good manners or proper behaviors, parents still play a more crucial role in raising them. Living in contemporary society, fathers and mothers are ones who understand what their children should do to perform well at school in the future, or what threats are surrounding their sons or daughters. Without care from parents, children may face a risk of orientation insufficiency.
In conclusion, I would argue that parents and grandparents should balance their time to take care of their children, and this is how a united large family is created.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, still, well, while, as for, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22456140351 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87334787998 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2112982041 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.083333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343592571415 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124719932851 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547103852094 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215646937355 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030581309047 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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