Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time
on sports. Why is it? Is it a positive or negative development.
Over the last decade, a large number of children have tendency to spend most of their
time and pay less attention to play sports. I will discuss on this topic and state my
opinion in this essay.
On the one hand, the trend to play computer games all the time instead of doing sports
comes with a number of reasons. To start with, the children always have a tight
schedule so they are impossible to use hours for physical activities. so, they destress
themselves by using their little leisure time for indoor games. In addition, due to the
increase of crime rate, parents usually tend to limit the freedom of their children
outsides.
On the other hand, the preference for playing electric games turns into several
drawbacks. First and foremost, it causes adoption of a sedentary lifestyle . this is
because they spend too much time on video games leading to extended period of
inactivity. For example, children nowadays seem to waste so much time on indoor
pastime and become inactive with all activities around. As a result, they are easily get
diseases such as obesity and shortsightedness. Furthermore, these games also have
terrible impact on children’s school performances. they can find such games absolutely
fascinating and then pay less attention on their study. this suffers a considerable drop
in their result.
In conclusion, it is necessary that children care more about doing sports as a
replacement for computers games since these games brings more negatives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Suggestion: So
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Suggestion: .
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Suggestion: got; gotten
...es around. As a result, they are easily get diseases such as obesity and shortsigh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17551020408 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74083839764 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612244897959 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1928095071 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.5333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212825691126 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656835497217 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558764477563 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635098440254 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523149742614 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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