Today"s fresh food like vegetables or fruits travels thousands of miles from the rural areas or farms before it reaches costumer in cities or urban areas. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative trend?
A thousand miles of way that traveled vegetables or fruits, produced from village, so that people in rural areas can gain a highest profit. This way is done in order that urban people love to eat vegetables or fruit from there. Even though this trend has a few negative impacts to both people.
Many people in villagers sell their produce in big city taking into consideration the fact that necessity of urban society are increasing as well as there is many demands from market or restaurant. A different price also that is caused why this happen. The profit that is gained by them is much more than gain in village. Even many persons from big city came to village buying a land to producing vegetables and fruits and when it could be harvested, they are going to bring to city for sold. Because the lands in rural are extremely fecund.
Most of rural communities rent or utilize their own car to bring food in city however, the distance is very far. They usually use wood box to keep the food. Will this way is safe for food? In some cases, this become the problem because of the long distance can make fresh produces are rotten. Good place is needed to keep for taking care it healthy and safe when people bought and consumed it. For instance, before provisions are carried into car, put it in deepfreeze so food as to keep it fresh and safe when other people eat that food. If this way still runs, economy of rural area is going to increase.
To sum up, the gain which is gotten from selling produce in city is made many people in village vie bringing their harvest there but sometimes the way to travel that production is wrong.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... so that people in rural areas can gain a highest profit. This way is done in ord...
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Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to eat vegetables or fruit from there. Even though this trend has a few negative impacts t...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ecessity of urban society are increasing as well as there is many demands from ma...
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Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are many demands'?
Suggestion: there are many demands
...rban society are increasing as well as there is many demands from market or restaurant. A different ...
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Line 3, column 495, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ey are going to bring to city for sold. Because the lands in rural are extremely fecund...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, well, as to, for instance, as well as, in some cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51006711409 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21967119815 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55033557047 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1327546075 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305800973278 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981401647911 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643265223456 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180275713126 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0974159238213 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.