Topic 8: a recent newspaper article reports that a 14-year-old boy who seriously destroyed his school got a punishment to clean streets instead of sent to the prison, do you think this is right? Or the young criminals should be sent to the jails
The tremendous school’s destruction of a 14-year-old boy revealed in an article has sparked a heated topic in the modern society. This crime caused him to clean streets instead of sending him to prison. I am totally agree with this decision of state besides arguing the idea that juvenile delinquency has to considered before convicting.
On the one hand, in the case of this young boy, I believe he deserve to be treated differently. First,prison poses a serious threat to younger future. Besides, a crime lead to prison may destroy their future because they have to finish their formation characteristics process in jails where they might be suffered from both physical and mental illness. Second, young generations will contribute to country’s flourish in future, If government prioritize strong punishment rather than educating these youngsters, it may cause to national’instability and the risk of lacking labour workforce.
On the other hand, I am convinced that it is necessary to carefully consider before sentencing a juvenile delinquency. A first explanation for that is people at this age are immature and impulsive to seriously recognize their actions. As the result, in major circumstances, they committed with offenses by incidence. On top of that, the juvenile delinquency is ascribed to parents and school’s responsibility that they did not give adequate attention on their children who at the age of demanding empathy and guidance. However, a number of serious crime such as murder or rape should have strong punishment. In this case, these law-breakers poses a threat to society’security and human well-being. Therefore, sending them to prison might deter similar criminal acts by other members of the public who have intended to carry out crimes.
In conclusion, although there is a hostile attitude against treating children differently adults, I agree with the decision of authorities in the case of 14-year-old boy. Moreover, I claim that It is substantial important to carefully consider before sending a child to jails.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: agreed
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'deserves'.
Suggestion: deserves
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Suggestion: , prison
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Suggestion: in the future
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42105263158 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38054694578 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603715170279 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6142164888 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.4375 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207773687848 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599520719335 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503935840745 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121214935399 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509691979172 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.