Tourism is an ever growing industry. What benefits do you think tourism brings to individuals and society.
Tourism has brought about a considerable change globally. Individuals as well as communities are benefited from this expanding industry. This essay will illustrate the economical and cultural advantages of this blooming field.
To embark upon, the tourism business has flourished in recent years owing to the investment made by countries to attract a sumptuous crowd because they recognized tourism as one the factors which can provide earnings to them as well as local crowd. Tourism business can act as a substitute for nation which lacks natural and industrial resources and has to rely on other nations for the same. Firstly, collection of fees from the tourists provides local authority with funds to maintain the monument reducing the burden on authorities to pay for the maintenance. Also, certain funds from this collection can be used for welfare of the local people by enrolling them into guide programs and developing the infrastructure and transportation.
Furthermore, this sector can generate profits for various countries dependent on cultural exchange and diversity. Interaction of visitors with local public leads to exchange of information about the cultural heritage of nation which proves to be one of the indirect source of promotion. Also, it acts as a platform for persons to share their values and cultures. Moreover, visitors might encourage the local products in their own country increasing the popularity. For example, France has boosted it’s economy by investing a hefty amount in tourism which has resulted in their language and products gaining popularity world wide.
To conclude, tourism has proved to be beneficial for the people and organizations as well because it helps in boosting the economy and turning the city into cosmopolitan. It also gives people exposure to existence of various cultures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, so, well, as to, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43902439024 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91475441852 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554006968641 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9497120342 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103306770316 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382876842907 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457851576244 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0677530442586 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295315720539 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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