Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female student in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Gender equality in education has been concerned around the world. Many people argue that the proportion of men and women should be the same in every course of higher education. In my opinion, I strongly against this idea and in this essay prove my point.
At first, reaching the same number of male and female in each class is so hard as it depends on the candidate. In other word, in university, student can choose their majority based on their skills or abilities and actually, some fields are more likely masculine gender while other are the opposite such as engineering or science. For instance, in Vietnam, university of science and technology have more male students than female students, in opposite side, women tend to choose university of foreign languages. So, there are some subject that are more popular for a particular sex, it is impossible for colleges to enroll the same numbers of boy and girl.
Secondly, it is believed that if universities try to balance the proportion of two genders’ participant, it limits the number of student joining a class and due to their sex, some talented candidates can lose the opportunity of attending their favorite major. As a result, they might feel boring with the course that they can not show their passion and qualification, soon, they will quit the class. Therefore, the equality in both gender create some drawbacks on student’s performance.
In conclusion, the negative effects of the same number of two sexes attending every course at higher education on students’ wishes and educational performance include preventing student from their passionate subject and reducing the academic standards. I believe that students can select what they want to learn and university should find the suitable candidate rely on their talent instead of their gender.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12794612795 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73828677605 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572390572391 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8041708842 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.916666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206566583607 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753840869585 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483402252324 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119832340509 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046638043969 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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