Watching a live performance such as a play, concert, or sporting event is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Many people argue that attending live events is more entertaining than watching those broadcast on television. Personally, I completely agree with this view.
On the one hand, the option to view a show at home is attractive for several reasons. Firstly, audiences can save time and money by watching TV. Instead of spending time on booking tickets, choosing seats and waiting in line to enter a stadium, plays or sports fans can simply enjoy their show by just a click of a remote control. Furthermore, technology provides viewers with a lot of features, such as volume control, recap shows, 3D mode, etc.
Nevertheless, I believe that attending live events is generally a better option. The first reason is that a live event may give you unforgettable memories. For instance, if you go to a stadium to watch a football match, you can enjoy the unique live atmosphere and watch your favorite players or team in person, things you can’t get on a TV screen. In addition, socialization and networking can be improved by attending live events. At a live event, you can meet new friends with the same hobby or supporting the same team. You can share your opinions or cheer for your favorite team together.
In conclusion, it seems evident that both sides of the idea have their own unique advantages, but I maintain that watching a live performance is the best way to enhance the viewing experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86610878661 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7786585362 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635983263598 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3623242287 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4615384615 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317851906632 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104025794361 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068873744526 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176238623909 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847435383244 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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