Live concerts and events has gained a lot of popularity since last decade. Many people argue that going to such live shows or games are more entertaining than watching them at home on television. I believe, the in person experience at such events are explicit, however, the comfort of watching them at home in a comfy sofa with a better view can be more relaxing.
Many people argue that attending live shows is the best way to experience the feel of a concert or a game. This is because at the event there's a large amount of audience attending it, and they are so enthusiastic, this creates an electrifying atmosphere. Everyone is cheering for their favorite team in a sport game and in a music concert you are surrounded by the humming sound of the audience, which creates an aura with different vibes. Such an experience is not possible while watching an event at home. A survey conducted by Book my show stated that majority of people would spend an extra dime to watch their favorite singer perform live.
On the other hand people who prefers to watch a live show from their home, favors the freedom of comfort. At home, people can watch the show or a game in a relaxed manner from their comfortable sofa. Whereas, in stadium there are thousands of people and one has to keep standing throughout the concert. Also, an individual saves a good amount of money when they watch it on a TV. Apart from this, as the technology has help to increase the viewing quality on television. One can see the close up's of the performer which is not possible in the stadium.
In conclusion, even though watching a live shows give a totally different kind of experience. I believe, a show when watched at home in a persons comfort zone makes the experience more relaxing and enjoyable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...or a game. This is because at the event theres a large amount of audience attending it...
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Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a relaxed manner" with adverb for "relaxed"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...me, people can watch the show or a game in a relaxed manner from their comfortable sofa. Whereas, i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus, whereas, while, apart from, as to, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63924050633 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59244245671 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525316455696 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7564402065 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.625 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257304367263 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909757924165 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449487390439 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16932660225 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587573651942 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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