While many people go to university for academic study, more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. Agree or disagree
In today's generation, the demand for higher academic education has reached its peak. However, a hot debate ensues over whether more people should take up job-related training to strengthen the workforce or not. While vocational training is necessary, I believe that seeking further study is a better option.
On the one hand, vocational practice can fill in the missing spots of blue-collar workers and create an easier career path. There is a persistent problem in many developed countries with the lack of a manual labor force. Doing skills training, therefore, can improve the situation. Additionally, vocational programs are more approachable and do not require much skill, making them suitable for students who are not academically inclined.
On the other hand, despite the benefits of vocational training, I still opt for better academic study. The demand for jobs like doctors, engineers, and teachers, which require a certain certification or diploma, is climbing dramatically. Encouraging students to apply to a university is the solution to meet these demands. Furthermore, the century of technology is gradually replacing traditional jobs with robots and smart artificial intelligence, making vocational training unnecessary.
In conclusion, while pre-employment courses are a good way to cope with a nation's current economic struggles, the merits of higher academic learning still outweigh those of vocational programs. Students should be encouraged to pursue further study to meet the demands of the job market and to equip themselves with the skills needed to succeed in a rapidly changing technological landscape.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'strengthening'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: strengthening
...ple should take up job-related training to strengthen the workforce or not. While vocational ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60728744939 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09894103827 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63967611336 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1721742078 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.538461538 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267645288739 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798777103739 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361479105456 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147122559725 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391701774325 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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