The world of work is changing rapidly. Working conditions today are not the same as before and people no longer rely on taking one job for life. Discuss the possible causes for these changes and give your suggestions on how people should
prepare for work in the future.
With the changes in the world of labor, the working environment is not the same as it used to be and people are not counting on lifelong employment anymore. While the causes of job hopping appear to be associated with low compensation and lack of promotion, there are two factors that future workers should take into account before entering the job market.
The main drivers behind high employee turnover are low remuneration and the lack of opportunities in companies. When people accomplish their assignments on time and conform to a company’s norms fully, they should be compensated correspondingly. However, the opposite is true in many cases nowadays where employees are paid negligibly making them reluctant to go the extra mile and quit, as a result. Moreover, even if their wages are decent, they simply may not be moving up the career ladder. If companies do not offer chances for a promotion, it will be difficult for them to keep experienced personnel.
However, I believe that there are two main elements that future workforce should bear in mind. Firstly, they should acquire as much practical experience as possible in addition to their theoretical knowledge. University students, for example, can consider applying for internship positions in their chosen fields to master practical subtleties of their future job. Secondly, people should be more committed to their employment at the start of their careers. This implies working for a lower salary understanding that promotion is not achieved overnight but earned throughout years of hard work. In no way will workers change jobs often if they realize the importance of these two basic suggestions.
In conclusion, people not only tend to change jobs for financial reasons, but also for promotional ones. Nevertheless, I think that if they obtain more practical experience prior to being employed and be ready to accept the initial difficulties of their work, this problem can be solved.
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- There seems to be an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year While some think the best way is to use the death penalty as a deterrent many people believe that other measures will be needed Discuss both sides and give your opinion 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21518987342 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88496536482 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594936708861 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5655578112 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.866666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271361383231 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089011477986 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775621824908 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173166009777 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575456152949 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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