The world of work is rapidly changing and employees cannot depend on having the same job or the same working conditions for life. Why is it the case? Can you suggest some ways to prepare people to work in the future?
Nowadays, more and more developing countries have employees changing jobs or working patterns to meet modern society demands. This essay will discuss the possible reasons for these changes and suggest some ways to better prepare themselves for their future careers.
On the one hand,
the developments in hi-tech machines and artificial intelligence, people all over the globe are losing their job.
For example, some of the equipment is being replaced by automated processes including in factory or manufactures. That thing makes millions of people in the world lose job. Beside that, the ever-increasing desire to cut expenses and increase profits in many countries like India or Philippines where the wages are lower.
However, there are some ways in which people can prepare for changes in their workplaces in the future. Additionally, autonomous vehicles are predicted to replace delivery and taxi drivers. For example, some graduated students do not have employment, so orientation when studying in high school is necessary.
In conclusion, people need to adapt to innovation's increase in employment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... are losing their job. For example, some of the equipment is being replaced by automate...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 170.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91693539708 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682352941176 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8503141814 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.2 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2678908759 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902080983741 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749033465209 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119420064406 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883479458575 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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