Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business.
Why do you think that is?
What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?
Arts and culture have a great co-relation where arts serve as a language to demonstrate the values and significance of a culture. However, it is underestimated by many people and has observed a decline in people interest due to their proliferating interests in other subjects such as science, technology, and business.
One of the preponderant reason behind this trend is that these areas facilitate greater job markets as compared to the arts field. Where, because of the enormous demand in these sectors, graduates commence the earnings at a relatively younger age. For example, the uprising IT industry created myriad of jobs across the globe which attracted students to pursue a career in computer science stream. Moreover, technological and business domains provide affluent salaries, compensations and other medical and travel benefits that characterize to automatically attract people, especially youth. Thus, an inclination towards these streams is natural.
Due to this growing trend, people are losing interests in the arts, and to preserve it, the government must take several measures. Firstly, governments should spread awareness about the arts by demonstrating exemplary works in museums to attract people to spend time appreciating its beauty. Furthermore, at the same time, governments should inaugurate new museums, theaters, and drama clubs in the cities to promote magnificent jobs which will open a broader stream of jobs for job seekers. Plausibly, this would help arts to build an improved and an intense image in the society.
To pen down the compendium, science, technology, and business are an evergreen and boosting domains, and leaning towards these steams is natural. But, few measures by the government can help boost people interest to gain attention.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 28, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... society. To pen down the compendium, science, technology, and business are an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98388841659 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632727272727 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7952178686 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.769230769 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158194478243 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549399408427 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407011675506 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973750818154 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436809518467 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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