Being a celebrity - such as a famous film star or sport personality brings problems as well as benefits.Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

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Being a celebrity - such as a famous film star or sport personality brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

Celebrities attract a lot of attention from the public but living as a celebrity has its merits and demerits. Some people believe that the superstars are always too busy and they lack privacy. However, celebrities are rich and respected in the society. Ultimately, I think the gains of being a celebrity outweighs the problems.

Celebrities are usually faced with different challenges. They usually have very busy schedules, so they hardly have time for personal things. For instance, a footballer spends a plethora of time outside home practising and playing for tournaments, which might deprive him of spending quality time with his family members. Moreover, Very Important Personalities (VIPs) hardly have any private life. Whatever they do instantly makes the news.

Nevertheless, despite the stated challenges, there are significant gains in being a celebrity. They are highly respected in the community. People usually regard them in high esteem because of the values they add to the society. A number of celebrities are known to have touched lives with their songs, movies, sports, projects and gifts. What is more, many celebrities are wealthy. They have a lot of opportunities to make money because of their fame. For instance, some companies engage celebrities to endorse their products which can lead to sales increment, such business can earn the celebrity a fortune.

In conclusion, I think the benefits of being a celebrity outweighs the challenges because there is a high possibility of becoming very wealthy and respected. More than the problems celebrities face with time and confidentiality, which can be easily managed, the gains that come with their status cannot be overemphasized.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38805970149 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96734473459 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570895522388 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5323406363 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2222222222 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8888888889 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232191978184 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762827576889 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737301928223 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159792025583 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825415733617 0.056905535591 145% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.39 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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