Children do not respect their parents as much as they did in the past. This behavior is now having a negative impact on society. Discuss
Increasing incidents of disobedience have become the concern of parents and such trend is being viewed as alarming and may have long term declining impact on society. I shall discuss the reason and effect of such behavior.
It is generally mentioned that people of previous generation were more disciplined and particularly their obedient behavior is highlighted. Some people believe that that time environmental conditions forced people to follow their elders. In past literacy rate was not high and people did not have skills to counter the argument. As a result, by default choices was to follow the elders in almost all cases. For instance, my uncle did not attend the school and forced to join the work at early age owing to direction given by my grandfather. Of course, there were some condition which compelled my grandfather to not to given him the opportunity to study but my uncle also did not oppose the decision as well.
However, literacy rate has increased in multifold and technical advancement has uplifted the knowledge of each age group, resulting society norms have become more liberal. Nowadays, children doing argument with parent is not seen as indiscipline; however, children cross the boundary and sometime insult their parents. For example, mu nephew who is in 8th class and label parents as backward because his parents are against his wishes of going to pub at this age. In addition, younger generation use technology and keep themselves update with latest trend and in case of improper argument, they show the fact to elders which sometime hit their ego and consider as disrespect from younger.
In conclusion, children have become more open with their elders and often cross the limit which is definitely a gross behavior. In some cases, even children are right, ego of elders make them disobedient.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 538, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
...e technology and keep themselves update with latest trend and in case of improper argument,...
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Line 4, column 129, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t which is definitely a gross behavior. In some cases, even children are right, eg...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, of course, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09302325581 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67799640999 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594684385382 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5352417205 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253512616649 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761226437966 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531996226028 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142022833817 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347463892681 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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