In cities many people are living alone. What are the reasons for it? It is a positive or negative trend?
Present day people live in a very fast paced and competitive world where they don't have a time for themselves. Hence they tend to live their own which I see as a negative development in today's society.
Man is a social animal since the day human civilisation began, but now they loosing their humanity and becoming like robots. People have obsessed with their monotonous lifestyle, from home to work and back and becoming anti-social day by day. For an example, it's very common these days when people are travelling majority of them using headphone or earphone to find an escapism. They are not paying attention to the outside. Seriousness of this is once man loose their felling they will no longer respect, love or listing to others which will make lot of conflicts and chaos with in the society and humanity may gone for good.
The other major negative side is, if there is an emergency there is no one to extend their helping hands. Person who lives alone has to deal with the situation on his or her own. As a result many youngsters today suffering from depression and psychological issues and is has become a serious problem in many countries. It has escalated suicidal incidents and juvenile delinquency figures in recent past. Moreover when someone lives alone, if he or she faced with any accident inside their place no one knows even their neighbour next door. Recent incident reported in India, an apartment was robbed and robbers had kill the owner and nobody knew about it until garbage collector came to the place.
In conclusion, when considering the all the facts above, I would like to reiterate the fact that living alone cannot see as a positive development yet which has many negative impact on people's lives. Therefore I believe it's time to change the way of living in modern city life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... paced and competitive world where they dont have a time for themselves. Hence they ...
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Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...e they dont have a time for themselves. Hence they tend to live their own which I see...
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Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...utside. Seriousness of this is once man loose their felling they will no longer respe...
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Line 3, column 613, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'go' or 'be gone'?
Suggestion: go; be gone
...os with in the society and humanity may gone for good. The other major negative s...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ile delinquency figures in recent past. Moreover when someone lives alone, if he or she ...
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Line 5, column 616, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'killed'.
Suggestion: killed
...an apartment was robbed and robbers had kill the owner and nobody knew about it unti...
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Line 5, column 616, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'killed'.
Suggestion: killed
...an apartment was robbed and robbers had kill the owner and nobody knew about it unti...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... many negative impact on peoples lives. Therefore I believe its time to change the way of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, as to, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78662420382 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50167090901 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636942675159 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6609371153 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.2 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20169279669 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059820480439 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518082029806 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132932147702 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613212845519 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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