Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important, discuss both and give your opinion.
It has argued by a significant number of individuals that college study is the prime way to grab a good job opportunity. Whereas, others consider learning soft skills and increasing capabilities are vital. Before reaching a conclusion, this essay will discuss both aspects first.
On the one hand, University education fulfils the criteria of most professional jobs such as doctors and engineers. Learning at college provides a platform to students for making them competent to the world and it helps them while performing professional duties. For illustration, medical professionals such as doctors, nurses can finish their college degree only, if their on-site training at the health centre is complete. Therefore it enables them to understand professionalism and working under pressure to save humans while operating, which makes them capable to fight for their jobs in an easy way.
On the other hand, experience and training are an essential skill for any candidate to attain the job. Having an experience shows the person is capable to do jobs without guidance and other expenditure for the organization, thus where it makes the difference for an experienced candidate to others and give him extra points to clear the criteria of a job application. For instance, often CEO or higher management are paid well as compared with other junior staffs because of their experience in the same filled.
In conclusion, although higher education from university helps the candidate to score better in preliminary tests for a job application, I believe that the practical knowledge and experience are more vital to acquire a job and is the easiest way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Message: Consider replacing "in an easy way" with adverb for "easy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2803030303 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97232413169 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602272727273 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7186878048 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.727272727 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206872877747 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858537953323 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592799729106 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131045932202 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473209650786 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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