With the development of social media, more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the internet in order to meet and chat with friends which can lead to potentially dangerous situations. What solutions can you suggest to deal with this problem?
Owing to the technological advancements, the access to and usage of social media has become increasingly popular among youngsters all around the world. Meeting and chatting with friends in these online platforms have never been monitored carefully which would lead to numerous issues including online bullying, security problems to name a few. In order to tackle these issues, immediate actions should be implemented.
One solution to address this meeting and chatting problem can be explained as increasing the family relationships. In the current context, the bonds between each member of a family has been deteriorated. Parents are more focused on financial prosperity and children receive the less attention from them which leading them to search for sharing and caring from others. The bonds within the family unit should be more strengthened and youngsters should be guided and advised about
the outside world. If they receive the required attention, love, guidance etc from their parents, unnecessary engagement in social media will be decreased.
Another way to deal with this threat can be stated as organising awareness programs among youngsters about the potential problems of using social media to meet and chat with friends. These programs can be started at school and university levels where more youngsters are located. If their awareness level of this is raised, it will be able to reduce this issue at the earliest possible level. Furthermore, teledramas, cinemas, stage plays, poster campaigns with the support of the government should be initiated to deliver this message.
In summary, with the advent of social media, youngsters are engaging in meeting and chatting with friends more frequently resulting in dangerous conditions and increasing family relationships and raising the awareness level of youngsters with this regard would be able to eradicate the problems.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-10-18 | pththom02@gmail.com | 78 | view |
| 2020-10-19 | ZeeKhan | 73 | view |
| 2020-04-11 | tarakrindani | 78 | view |
| 2020-01-06 | hamza.ijaz980@gmail.com | 61 | view |
| 2020-01-06 | Ayesha dar | 81 | view |
- Some people think that money is the best gift for teenagers Others disagree Discuss both views and give your opinion 77
- All parents want the best opportunity for their children. There are some people who think schools should teach children skills but others think having a huge range of subjects is better for a child's future. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 67
- Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 67
- There seems to be an increase in the number of serious crimes committed each year. While some think the best way to solve this problem is to use the death penalty as a deterrent, many people believe that other measures will be needed. Discuss both sides. 73
- Write a letter to your friend who is visiting your apartment while you are gone.Tell him where the keys are.Tell him to take care of one thing while while you are away.Tell him what to do on the way of your arrival. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 479, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sters should be guided and advised about the outside world. If they receive the r...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, then, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50684931507 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78972358902 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565068493151 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.123851945 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.692307692 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379021694802 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123468136934 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101318966712 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201702619893 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0961257296527 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.