Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern school. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Discipline is the key for the better growth of the society. Schools are the home of discipline learning for the students but presently this belief is undergoing continuous degradation. Teachers are provided with big responsibility of teaching students the importance of good behavior and making them understand their value, but parents should also support teachers by delivering the same thing to their child. In my opinion, it is the sole responsibility of the teachers who are considered an ideal personality by the children’s.
Teachers are being given many important duties apart from teaching particular subject. For instance, it is their sole responsibility to tell students about the good and bad behavior. They should show them the great people examples such as Mahatma Gandhi, Abraham Lincoln etc. who have done some very great work for the society just by following some very basic disciplines like honesty, truth in their life and they won the heart of the people. Further, the students should also punished by teachers if they do not follow the rules of the schools. These few measures will make the children to differentiate between the good and bad because they are trained in such manner.
On the other hand, parents are also held responsible disciplining their child as they spend their maximum time at home and if they will not see well behavior in their parents, they would not be able to learn about it. Whatever they see at home they perceive the same and start considering it as the best.
In my view, although the parents are given the responsibility of nurturing and bringing up their child providing them with each and every necessity of life but teachers are always being idealized by the students. They learn, look-up and always seek the help of their tutors in every decision of their life.
In the conclusion, discipline is an important part of the human life that should be taught to the students at every step in their life. Teachers should make them follow, and punish them also for their betterment. Parents do have the exclusive place in their children heart but they always cherish their teachers at difficult times.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: punish
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, apart from, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00555555556 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67904534314 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488888888889 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2114989235 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1764705882 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125882330827 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489319643163 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039542014621 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803200752518 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311430563032 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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