do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problem?
Being a celebrity can play a pivotal role in a man's private and social life. Indubitably, it has a powerful influence on his future. it seems it provides people with a useful source by which they can be well-liked.This study aims to discuss that being a celebrity is enjoyable for at least three main reasons.
First of all, being a celebrity can be very helpful to those who want to earn a good living. For one thing, the more a person is famous the more he/she can make money. For instance, imagine a world renowned sports star who has become all rage for playing in various teams. Another thing is that not only a famous person can increase his disposable salary on a specific field in which he is talented but also enormous number of manufacturers would offer them to have quotas in their marketing ploys. As an illustration, in Iran, many actors and actresses play a role in commercial advertisements.
Second, it is often suggested that being a celebrity can be used as the best way to lift the poor out of poverty. In the first place,such well-known people are able to inquire the government to help the poorest of the poor in a society.An example may help clarify the point.In China, since 2000, famous actors have managed to persuade their government to place a high priority on child labourers. In the second place, celebrities who own amazing positions in a community have an obligation to allocate a budget on providing commercial and recreational facilities for low income families. All in all, their high income opens a new gateway to wonderful horizons.
The last but not least,being a celebrity brings famous people happiness and festivity. Doctor William Austin, the head of psychology department at Oxford university asserts that most lunatics are people suffering from dementia are suggested to be in public places and participate in social activities to become sociable.In Japan, pschologists cure their patients with asking them to be in populated areas which may lead them to become happy.The latest figures released by Ministry of health revealed that about 70% percent of celebrities had been patients who suffer from mental illnesses such as depression, dementia, and so on. In other words, becoming a celebrity aids them to be happier.
On the basis of the above, it can be concluded being a celebrity is meritorious. However, the question is: can being a famous person improve the welfare and health of people in general> only time will tell, but in the meantime, being a celebrity continues to influence every aspect of our daily lives. The hope is that the government provide an impressive financial and moral support.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, well, another thing, at least, for instance, in general, such as, first of all, for one thing, in other words, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2211.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 447.0 315.596192385 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94630872483 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81366495136 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552572706935 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 705.6 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 115.806578312 49.4020404114 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 122.833333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183846275352 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666479720659 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06245058958 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105580039021 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246799708475 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.