obesity is now a major global epidemic. what can be done to tackle the increasingly common problem?
obesity plays a harmful role in our physical and emotional lives.Indubitably, it has a powerful influence on our health and its impact is often negative. Although we might not like to admit it, it has created certain unpleasant consequences for peoples' lives. This study aimes to explain the problem of obesity and offers two basic solutions for solving it.
Undoubtedly, there are several serious disadvantages to obesity. In the first place, obese people are predisposed to many diseases such as diabetes, immune disorders, coronary heart diseases, etc. An example may help clarify the point. In China, approximatly 70% of fat people have to visit cardiologists at least monthly. In the second place, such people exteremly tend to be alone rather than in touch with others. All in all, depression would be the sole result of obesity.
One possible solution these days is that we prioritise exercisimg in our daily programs. Not only exercising will help us be happier but it also provides us with a useful way by which we can lose weight. For instance, since 2000, prominence is given to taking exercise in order to be fit and fashionable.The more people do sport the more endorphine will be released by their minds. As an illustration, exercising has had a lasting impression on actors's lives; therefore they are more well-mannered than usual habitants.
Another useful solution is that the government should educate people how to have control on their diets. Doctor Jame Austin the head of sport department at Oxford university asserts that people should eat highly recommended foods which are rich in carbohydrates. these people must be aware of destructive role of jumk foods. The latest figures released by Ministry of interior affairs revealed that the fast food outlets are not proliferating anymore. In other words, people are more likely to eat healthy foods than aliments with high unsaturated fat.
In conclusion, we can say that obesity is a threatening issue in man's life and should be brought under control. Through careful planning, education, cooperation, we can eliminate the menacing side effest of obesity. there is hope that such problems are eradicated from the face of the earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, at least, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17270194986 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89467181718 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632311977716 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1061435073 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4285714286 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0952380952 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108181022556 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304311659982 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344650757637 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0640329353809 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377744009674 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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