Due the advancement in computer technology the trend of working from home will bring a dramatic change to people’s lives. Is it a positive or negative development?Give your opinion and examples.

Submitted by minoomrd on Wed, 07/17/2019 - 01:35

In this recent decades, by growing technology all over the world, the trend of working is created that people work remote and it has been changing people life. However, it has both prons and cons. In this essay, advantages and disadvantages will be discussed,
It is certainly obvious that people feel extremely convenient in this condition and they can work in the peaceful at home. Moreover, people especially women, can work more effectively in their home and do their duties in the home. For instance, in Iran women tend to work outdoor although they have to do house-working and take care of their children. A recent study in the Stanford University illustrate more than 72 percent of women feel comfortable to work remote. Hence, it has brilliant effects on people life in recent years.
On the other hand, staying at home has some irreparable effects on human being’s life. It can lead to depression and fade away their motivation because they probably would not connect to other people and it makes them depressed. In addition, working outside leads to augmenting our knowledge by connecting to hard-working person. We can see them and the technologies that are used in their routines. So it affects our life unconsciously. For example, I try to ask many questions about the relevant technologies in my career because it can improve my level at work.
All in all, In spite of the fact that working remote has vivid effects on people’s life, it can have irrecoverable results too. Personally, I would rather to work out and connect to people and find some friends in my work place.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 102, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in spite of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91512915129 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80843081985 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557195571956 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7493149227 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185128405434 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643173719276 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482565670531 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126668653003 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02859908803 0.056905535591 50% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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